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Title: When Mermaids Sing
Author: Mark Zvonkovic
Rating: Excellent!
Publisher: iUniverse
Web Page: www.iuniverse.com
Reviewed by: Eric Jones

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  • Larry Brown is in the same precarious position that lots of young people find themselves in these days. He’s not sure that his high school teaching job is his “career”, his girlfriend has him on strings, his family is pulling him in different directions, and then there’s this business with the local cult. “When Mermaids Sing” is, at its heart, about dealing with life after losing the innocence of early adulthood. Mark Zvonkovic’s stunning debut speaks to the grown Holden Caulfield in all of us. That deep part of us that hopes for something more, but still chokes down what is.

    When lost Larry Brown discovers that his childhood friend, Bradley, has joined a cult called The Path to God, he becomes mixed up in another family’s bid to kidnap and “deprogram” a relative. This may sound like the latest Dan Brown thriller, but Zvonkovic handles it like a tight rope walker handles a balancing rod; realism on one end, symbolism on the other. Don’t expect the fun suspense and action that this plot summary implies.

    “When Mermaids Sing” is more interested in the juxtaposition of Bradley’s adopted lifestyle and those of contemporary society. His writing is small town savvy, filled with memories that any reader might recognize, and with a taught wit and attention to detail that makes humor a large part of Larry’s journey. Although frequent tense shifts, present to past, have a propensity to transport the reader without a moment’s notice to some distant or frequent memory of Larry’s, they soon become a welcome staple of the novel.

    Zvonkovic’s novel is more than merely the sum of its parts; rather it is a collection of stories that build on running themes. Like Bradley, Larry is trapped in a cult of his own, brainwashed into feelings of guilt at the hands of his girlfriend, family, and job. His climatic struggle to bring Bradley back to the world is a defining moment for Larry, and perfectly threads the separate strings of his life together, unfortunately, only to form a noose.

    Brown’s musings about life, time, and little things are mesmerizing and show a literary deftness that goes deeper than the story’s surface structure. It also speaks to the book’s proclivity to jump from point to point in time as if they were charged electrons bouncing around in an atom rather than linear.

    It’s not perfect, I should say. It’s a bit heavy on dialogue and in chapters where Brown’s clever interjections are scant it loses some of its flair. But these moments are few and far between, and the natural course of the novel slows, but never stops. By the end of it, “When Mermaids Sing” does what all good literature should do. It gives you pause and consideration for what you’ve built. And haven’t built.








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